forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 10:26:40 AM): i got a good beed on a possible direction...let me know how it is working out i got a page or more done...i dont want to do anymore in this direction if we dont both like it...f...message me later i will be in houston most of the day but may be able to message back some
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 10:27:07 AM): oh and I Titled Chapter 3 The Gaiasphere
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 3:11:29 PM): I like the direction so far. A few small corrections but on the right track. Keep it up.
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 4:00:18 PM): Sweet...how is your day
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 4:00:37 PM): Ok I guess. Our power just came back on after being off all night
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 5:25:34 PM): What are you up to?
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 5:41:45 PM): What's kickin sir?
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 6:06:51 PM): Houston
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 6:07:07 PM): What are you even doing in Houston :P?
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 6:22:57 PM): Seminar with my wife and brother a hiswife
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 6:24:03 PM): ah I see
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 9:18:25 PM): so I decided to do the 4 masks painting after all and I have the two hardest masks drawn already
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 9:20:40 PM): Nice onion...i am trapped in a car with crazy people...
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 9:20:56 PM): Well then you should feel right at home
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 9:22:16 PM): No joke right
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 9:23:07 PM): This painting is going to be a bitch. Your mask is going to be the hardest to paint
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 9:23:55 PM): How big is itn
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 9:24:03 PM): It?
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 9:24:44 PM): 24 x 36 inches
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 9:27:12 PM): You going to be online tonight?
forrestjones2010 (1/30/2010 9:27:52 PM): Yes
cagedmind0531 (1/30/2010 11:43:43 PM): You home yet?
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 12:56:17 AM): poke
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 9:09:13 AM): Sorry man I passed out early last night...thought I would wake up around midnight and keep going...catch you later on...
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 1:01:38 PM): What's kickin
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 1:23:08 PM): back
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 1:32:41 PM): Are you going to write today or should I take over?
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 2:01:36 PM): I am tonight....but you are welcome to if you'd like to...
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 5:13:47 PM): You said you had a direction so I want you to go with it. Just try to get some done tonight
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 5:14:22 PM): K
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 5:23:19 PM): What's kickin sir?
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 5:26:48 PM): In a boy scout meetin with canan...
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 5:32:03 PM): Oh ok. Man you stay busy.
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 5:33:53 PM): U know tthis man
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 6:43:50 PM): What time you gonna be on?
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 6:54:49 PM): Now
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:00:01 PM): on
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:07:31 PM): Hey dude
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:09:14 PM): hay hay hay
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:09:19 PM): This had already been shown evident because of Graven and Axis. The eye caused her to go into hiding in fright as soon as she was able after their first encounter. The Metal Eye pricked her as she would come near to speaking to Adahn later. Gaia, as well as the other three could not speak verbally, but of the other three she was the closest to that ability. Her non verbals were usually easy to understand and Graven tried to cipher her her dance as much of it as he could due to his own attraction and intrigue. For Graven Gaia Graven not only held a casual curiosity, but a heathy bit of attractive mystique.
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:10:18 PM): For Graven Gaia not only held...
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:10:31 PM): You retyped Graven. Good stuff though
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:10:52 PM): swing
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:11:07 PM): i have not had a chance to write all weekend
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:11:14 PM): been blowing and going
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:11:38 PM): Yeah I figured as much. I was going to pick it up but you said you had direction. I wanted to give you a chance to incorporate it
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:12:04 PM): thanks
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:12:31 PM): i have about 30 minutes to write for now so i will let you go so i can do that
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:12:48 PM): will catch you on later
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:12:55 PM): not crashing early tonight
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:14:06 PM): k
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:17:31 PM): I painted two of the masks and I posted them on facebook
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:17:47 PM): hat was quick
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:17:49 PM): that
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:18:05 PM): would you say they are in a jungle type setting right now
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:18:06 PM): ?
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:18:08 PM): Yeah, was bored
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:18:12 PM): Yes jungle
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:18:15 PM): k
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:18:40 PM): how many days away to the stone shelter
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:19:09 PM): I am not sure if I said or not. It's a big forest.
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:19:18 PM): k
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:20:07 PM): the masks look great
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:20:31 PM): I was kinda worried the colors on the Fracture mask were not so hot but I guess it looks good from a distance
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:24:05 PM): it looks good
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:24:12 PM): gaia fears metal
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:30:27 PM): do we have any known history of the 4 vyn adahn gaia etc prior to now
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:30:43 PM): did you have anything you wanted specifically
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:30:48 PM): done
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:31:01 PM): before i start making it up
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:31:09 PM): Not really. Aside from what we already discussed
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:32:07 PM): the rune bomb exploding and gaia saving graven?
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:32:21 PM): yeah
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:32:24 PM): i mean like how they all met and came to travel together
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:32:32 PM): Oh
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:32:37 PM): and how adahn can speak and they cnt
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:32:42 PM): stuff like that
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:33:28 PM): Graven stumbles upon the feral one remember?
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:33:48 PM): sure i got that...i mean independent of graven
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:33:56 PM): But as far as Adahn being able to talk I imagine he hid his gift or something
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:34:06 PM): in their world
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:34:10 PM): So he was banished when he was older
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:34:17 PM): k
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:34:24 PM): Other then that it's all open
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:35:25 PM): We are really going to have to double check this chapter for consistency. I fear I may have made a mistake or two.
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:36:03 PM): where?
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:36:28 PM): Not sure. I'll need to reread it. There is alot of new characters all at once.
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:36:44 PM): true...
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:37:09 PM): For example. Who can talk and who can't. I think I said they all can't talk but Adahn but I am happy to change that.
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:38:50 PM): ok
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:38:54 PM): RM Stringer a friend of yours?
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:38:59 PM): yes
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:39:03 PM): He's a follower on our blog so I was wondering
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:39:10 PM): he is a photogrepher
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:39:31 PM): he is different
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:39:43 PM): different?
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:39:57 PM): you may not want to friend him on fb
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:40:07 PM): he posts everything he does
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:40:12 PM): ah ok
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:40:13 PM): EVERYTHING
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:40:17 PM): lol
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:40:33 PM): So do I!
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:40:35 PM): :P
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:41:29 PM): you know it would be easier for Graven and Gaia to hook up if she could talk
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:41:41 PM): he coulsd say
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:41:49 PM): whats up sexy
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:41:56 PM): lol
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:41:58 PM): wht to get in my bed and hum
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:42:01 PM): hump
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:42:06 PM): lol
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:42:07 PM): this meat sack
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:42:27 PM): jj
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:42:29 PM): Come to my conjured stone hut and I'll show you how to...gesture
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:42:41 PM): fo reals
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:43:01 PM): By the way
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:43:05 PM): yes
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:43:12 PM): Feel free to add a "several months pass" or something
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:43:20 PM): you nkow i cant write while we are talking right?
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:43:28 PM): cool
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:43:46 PM): yeah I know, just haven't had anyone to talk to. Beth's been busy
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:44:07 PM): i gotta go pick up the canan monster from church...be back on later
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:44:12 PM): i dont mind talking
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:44:20 PM): i enjoy it tremendously
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:44:31 PM): i just want to do my part with the book too though
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 7:44:49 PM): Alrighty. Message me later. We'll get some work done.
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:44:56 PM): ok
forrestjones2010 (1/31/2010 7:45:00 PM): brb
cagedmind0531 (1/31/2010 9:37:44 PM): What's kickin
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 12:34:05 AM): There?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 1:05:50 AM): Poke!
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 9:36:58 AM): I started taking a new medication on top of this other one that was already making me drowsy...& when I take them together I don't have a chance of staying
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 9:37:06 AM): Awake
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 9:38:16 AM): So I am going to have to get my stuff done & then take my meds...i like most of what these meds do...but the knock out part is annoying....sorry
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:01:00 PM): Hey man how goes?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:08:46 PM): Trying to get into work..
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:08:57 PM): Trying?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:10:08 PM): I just can't get into it recently...some days its awesome...some days I just want to quit
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:10:46 PM): Sorry to hear that man. At least it gives you alot of time to work on other shit.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:10:54 PM): I wish I could just draw & paint & write for a living
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:12:00 PM): Maybe we'll get there eventually.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:14:01 PM): It does...truth be told my job is somewhat hanging by a thread...& I hope that eventually does happen
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:14:34 PM): What do you mean it's hanging by a thread?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:15:17 PM): I haven't been putting my all into it for a matter of years now & it is obvious...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:15:34 PM): We have production goals
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:15:46 PM): Like back at spherion
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:16:03 PM): I see. Are things that bad?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:16:08 PM): & I am at a bare minimum of standard
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:16:56 PM): I can claw my way out of it but I am depressed most of the time & it seems near impossible
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:17:15 PM): Have you talked to Tish about it?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:18:05 PM): It is so stressful...yeah she knows I want to do something else but I can't yet because she isn't working
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:19:14 PM): I am supporting both of us right now & I made some incredibly stupid investment descisions in the down market that cost me allot of money
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:19:16 PM): I see. Well I'm here for you man if you ever need to talk. Balancing art and life is really hard. It's almost like they are ends sometimes.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:19:30 PM): Very stoopid descisions
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:20:19 PM): What do you mean "ends"
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:22:11 PM): Sometimes if feels like to be productive you have to sacrifice part of that creativity. Everyone I know who isn't creatiive seem fine with their
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:22:13 PM): jobs
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:25:13 PM): I mean to be productive at work, not in art.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:26:38 PM): Oh I see...& I agree...its almost a sell out in a way...its like art is the real me & work is the fake me a its schitzophrenic...i can't consolidate the 2
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:26:54 PM): without casualties
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:28:04 PM): I think publishing a book may be the first step to you breaking away from jobs.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:28:22 PM): I am almost their with this career in some ways though...more so than any other I have found...only because I subcontract out for other people to do all the
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:28:40 PM): Work while I work on art >:-)
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:28:49 PM): lol that's sadistic
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:29:50 PM): Its the way the industry works...everyone in my position does the same thing...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:30:06 PM): Some hunt...some travel
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:30:18 PM): I am an artist writer
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:31:58 PM): All I do is find money one time...stick it in a place....check on it once a year...talk to the client once a year...write the other 364 days...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:32:40 PM): Jj....if only it were that easy
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:33:04 PM): Yeah no shit, that would be nice
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:35:16 PM): I am 9 million dollars away from doing that...i have a plan that requires that I find 16 milllion & so far I have found 5...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:35:47 PM): lol Well I could do it with 1 million!
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:36:26 PM): me too if it was mine...lol
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:37:22 PM): Anywho...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:38:03 PM): So about the writing. Do you still want to do some or do I need to take over. I know you want to do your part.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:38:20 PM): You think 20 chapters is a good number to shoot forn
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:38:30 PM): Yeah probably
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:39:18 PM): Go ahead a take over until I can level out on these meds...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:39:33 PM): This new one is a bear
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:39:39 PM): I need you to post all you have written so far.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:40:15 PM): I am going to start sucking down coffee like a banshee to see if I can stay up tonight
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:40:36 PM): Its all posted...i work directly on the blog
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:40:45 PM): Ah I see.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:41:16 PM): Sorry I didn't get very far
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:41:20 PM): What's it under?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:41:50 PM): The Gaiasphere
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:42:04 PM): oh, /facepalm. There it is
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:43:02 PM): As for not writing alot the only reason I am a little frustrated is I could have been working on it. It's no worries though. I know it's not
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:43:07 PM): your fault.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:44:30 PM): Thanks
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:45:19 PM): What you did do was pretty good. Can you tell me where you were going with it so I can continue where you were headed?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:45:39 PM): I know you understand how meds work...it makes me think back to some of the complications you were having back in the day when we started working together on
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:46:39 PM): On this and how insensitive I was to you and the medication process...i apologie for that jason...i was an ass for that...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:47:17 PM): Man no one can know what people with mental disorders go through until they go through it themselves. I really understand. Really.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:47:50 PM): K
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:48:39 PM): I wanted to go through a brief history of how they each came to be in their small group together
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:49:05 PM): Veyn syrka gaia & adahn
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:49:36 PM): Hmmm. I like that idea. I'm not sure how to impliment it though.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:49:51 PM): A short snippet of the action that got them banished...what they rmember of their initial place of banishment
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:50:26 PM): What they wore....were they naked? Beaten?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:50:43 PM): I'm really happy with the work you were doing. Are you going to be able to work tonight?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:50:57 PM): was it maliciaous? & disgracefuln
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:51:27 PM): I am going to drink so much coffee I sure hope so
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:53:12 PM): Tell you what...regardless I will do this piece...you pick up from the sphere
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:53:38 PM): Since in your mind that is where you are anyway right?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:54:16 PM): Yeah. Honestly I am kinda phased out of writing. I need some time to get it back. Kind of lost my flow.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:56:45 PM): Do you want to just do some art for a while?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:57:14 PM): Might have to. I'm going to try to get it back though. Scared to lose it permanently.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 2:58:58 PM): That's not going to happen...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 2:59:40 PM): Yeah I realize it's a stretch I am just so paranoid about falling into my old ways. I need to keep focused. Sometimes it's hard.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:00:59 PM): I understand...i am digging your writing & your art...there is a maturity in it...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:01:34 PM): No idea where that came from. I have basically been living in a cave until these past couple months
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:03:07 PM): So you haven't created anything at all since 2005? Is that when Rita went through?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:03:21 PM): Yeah. I've been totally stagnant
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:04:24 PM): that's odd...so why now?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:05:03 PM): I'm not sure.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:06:15 PM): I think one reason may be because the universe wants this project to be completed...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:06:58 PM): Maybe so. That would certainly be nice
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:09:58 PM): I believe I am ready to have some completed works put into the market...I finally have the confidence I need to move forward. I have also waited until about
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:10:20 PM): Now to move in the commercial direction...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:10:40 PM): That's a good thing to hear.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:13:54 PM): Let's do dis
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:14:06 PM): I'm psyched coach
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:14:12 PM): Send me in!
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:16:57 PM): Gaudet...the bases are loaded...you are at bat...the pitch is lobbed into your sweet spot...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:18:05 PM): I throw down the bat, pull out my sketchbook, and begin to write. Barely dodging the pitch.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:19:14 PM): Lol
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:19:41 PM): Yeah I am not much for sports these days either
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:19:46 PM): lol
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:20:23 PM): I'm going to have it to where Graven leaves on his own after Iboga and the others follow once they determine he's left.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:21:22 PM): I have questiones about the stone shelter
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:21:40 PM): Shoot
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:22:39 PM): The stone shelter is the sphere tree right
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:23:28 PM): No. It's near it. I haven't figured out what to do exactly with that.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:25:21 PM): Ok....what is inside the shelter....does it lead anywhere else...into the earth...into another dimention
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:26:05 PM): Not that I know of. For now it's just a shelter. Nothing significant other then it's made out of stones.
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:26:59 PM): I want Graven to have to kill something. A monster in the forest that tries to hurt the others. I want him to sincerely regret it.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:29:41 PM): He does not like to kill...then he can study it & recreate it
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:30:02 PM): Or be able to
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:31:05 PM): Gaia is forge right
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:31:13 PM): yes
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:32:57 PM): & she creates...but presently not on an advanced a level as graven...this is his attraction to her...besides the fact that she is hot
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:33:47 PM): lol
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:34:23 PM): I want him to teach her how to see & create using runes...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:34:48 PM): Sounds good.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:34:54 PM): He somehow discovers that she can already see them
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:35:05 PM): I like that idea.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:35:48 PM): But has no idea how to assimilate them that's why she putes the pieces of different plants together to make new ones
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:36:09 PM): That will evolve their relationship quickly
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:36:38 PM): Sounds like you have it already worked out. Good stuff.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:36:43 PM): That can happen in the shelter or near the sphere
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:37:48 PM): working it out now with you
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:38:01 PM): Can the sphrer be entered?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:38:11 PM): It can be but I haven't worked that out yet.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:38:38 PM): The sphere can be entered...but not by just anyone
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:39:05 PM): Something like dna could be in there
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:39:14 PM): Or a portal
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:39:39 PM): It could. In the previous writing I had it to where it took certain forest sounds in sequence to open it. Now I don't know.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:39:42 PM): It could be another story vector like axis
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:39:57 PM): Or an arc if need be
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:40:00 PM): Like what?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:41:13 PM): I think this group needs to stay a while near the base of the gaispheere before iboga shows up to work out some character depth...say 7 to 10 pages or so...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:41:40 PM): We might need another chapter then.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:42:18 PM): Not sure but it is a special object so it needs to do something...or lots of things special...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:42:32 PM): Ok
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 3:51:13 PM): I really like the direction all of this is taking
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 3:54:08 PM): Me too
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:04:58 PM): I've written about a page or so but it's going to be out of sequence. You can easily insert it anywhere.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:06:39 PM): Sweet...& he hits a tripple and hollyfield wins the fight
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:07:03 PM): lol
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:07:29 PM): You want me to mail you what I have?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:08:26 PM): Yes
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:11:14 PM): sent
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:11:34 PM): K
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:13:38 PM): Basically this establishes that Graven will never kill again
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:16:34 PM): Not even in self defense?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:17:22 PM): I prefer if he didn't, which will be interesting when he encounters Iboga.
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:19:01 PM): Did you read it yet? or gonna get to it later?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:22:20 PM): For some reasn I can't open my gmail at the moment... I will keep trying...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:23:12 PM): Alrighty. I was thinking Siren could kill Iboga.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:24:01 PM): Sweet she is a cold blood biaaatch
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:24:46 PM): We need a reason that she cares about Graven. Maybe she witnesses some stuff. Like Gaia's death.
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:31:03 PM): Back in the lab Siren watches the scene unfold through the eyes of the chronoton-scryer, a device meant to screen her targets in time.
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:31:11 PM): Siren stands awestruck as the namesake of the Gaiasphere herself is struck down and the look upon Graven's face as she is.
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:31:22 PM): Siren never cared much for Gaians but something was profound about this moment.
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:31:36 PM): It was symbolic of life defeating death, of light over darkness, for it was known that when Gaia died her essence became one with the Gaiasphere,
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:31:43 PM): the symbol of an era and the creation of everything she ever knew.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:35:05 PM): She wants his rune knowlege to twist it for weaponry
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:35:56 PM): Yeah I know but she's a human too, and witnessing the birth of a god can humble anyone.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:36:52 PM): Agreed
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:38:05 PM): We need more scenes with siren. She needs to become personally attached to her target. The ultimate failure of an assassin.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:42:00 PM): Music to my ears
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:42:34 PM): I can evolve her with little tto no effort she is my attack bitch
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:42:56 PM): Mwa ha ha ha haaaaa
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:43:03 PM): lol
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:45:54 PM): I thought of another dangerous bot named Soren or sorenson if we want to use her some where...Siren's more evil sluttly robot sister bot slayin homicidal maniac
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:46:15 PM): ROFL
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:48:08 PM): Thought you might get a kick outta that one
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:56:24 PM): I think devoting a chapter to them all getting to know each other is a good idea.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:56:54 PM): Me too
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 4:57:40 PM): That gives us a chance to add some Siren stuff without forcing it.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 4:59:03 PM): Brilliant
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:03:37 PM): I've written about 2 pages. One scene the group encounters on the way to the tree. Another with Siren and the start to Chapter 4 or as it stands
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:03:40 PM): chapter 5
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:04:12 PM): Nice work
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:06:17 PM): We need a spot to end chapter 3
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:06:51 PM): How long is it right nown
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:07:47 PM): 6 pages so probably alot more in book format
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:08:10 PM): 12
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:09:10 PM): You have a sentence about them needing water. They don't need it remember? Need to find another reason to take their route.
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:11:49 PM): I got it. They don't wanna get lost
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:18:18 PM): What time are you going to be on tonight?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:27:34 PM): Oops ok
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:30:43 PM): Crap why don't they need water again?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:31:07 PM): They only need purpose to live remember :P
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:32:16 PM): Can I have them like water...or at least gaia like watter
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:33:34 PM): I will be on around 10ish
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:33:50 PM): Purple purpose
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:37:13 PM): Yeah you can have Gaia like water
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:45:11 PM): I can just entrance her with water...she is the prototypical hippie anyway
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:45:30 PM): lol...our book is about hippies...great...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:47:19 PM): You don't like hippies?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:47:53 PM): lol nothing against hippies,it's just funny
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:48:19 PM): indeed
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:49:13 PM): The book is 44 pages so far
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:53:19 PM): Wowsers...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:53:34 PM): And its good
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:54:20 PM): We need a good 'reliable' critic badly. Not like these other guys
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:54:47 PM): You gave it to them what, a week ago or more and no word back.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:55:03 PM): One will emerge soon enough
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:55:44 PM): I have a few others to give it to...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:55:57 PM): Say 5 or 6
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:56:02 PM): What about Tish?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:56:31 PM): She is working on her masters right now...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:56:46 PM): Oh well so much for that
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:57:03 PM): Jim will read it soon & will give aan honest thourough run down
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 5:57:20 PM): Might wanna remind him
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:58:47 PM): When we complete it I will pay for firstediting.com to edit it befor we begin to start submit it for bublication
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 5:59:22 PM): I will
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 6:02:51 PM): Man I have the coolest background on my computer right now. It's a photo of lightning hitting water
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:03:37 PM): Dig
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 6:30:30 PM): I'm running to the movie store right fast. Be back shortly.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:35:47 PM): Read emaik
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:35:51 PM): Email
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:36:05 PM): Freakin loved it
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:36:26 PM): Siren came for the bomb!
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:36:52 PM): Soren came for Graven's package!
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:39:22 PM): Hey have you left yetmm
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:39:34 PM): Want free movies?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 6:46:01 PM): I'm back. I pay 40 or so a month and rent all I want to. I'm on a program
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:49:21 PM): Gotcha I was gonna say you coulduse my netflx I'd if you'd like
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 6:49:55 PM): Nah I am on a good plan. I rent like 20 or more movies a month and blockbuster is right by our house. It's like a 2 minute trip
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 6:54:09 PM): So what were you saying about Siren after a bomb?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 6:59:39 PM): Siren came to graven soley to learn how to make bombs & weapons
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:00:11 PM): Does she decide to do that after failing to get the eye before?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:01:50 PM): She is an opportunist...she knows he will discover & make different things...she will observe & take by guile or force at random
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:02:25 PM): Sounds good.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:03:33 PM): She can't be trusted...the hag...the dangerous bot....
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:04:28 PM): Sucks you can't get on till 10. I really can't wait to get some work done.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:05:44 PM): She is a ball crushing shister weaponess covetting jewbotess dancing swear burglar
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:06:30 PM): lol sometimes I don't think you and english are on the same page
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:06:51 PM): When I get my numbers back up at work I will start bringing my laptop up here again...but until then I am punished
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:07:37 PM): Thanks...i think
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:09:26 PM): So you liked the stuff you read?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:10:36 PM): Hells bent yes
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:12:33 PM): Want to hear something funny? I modeled the masks off a picture of Hillary Clinton! rofl
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:15:33 PM): No way
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:16:05 PM): I used vladamir putin
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:16:16 PM): haha
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:16:40 PM): Jj I used italian renassanse masks
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:17:04 PM): I mean for the proportions of the eyes/nose/mouth/eyes
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:18:11 PM): I have another reader...a school teacher
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:18:21 PM): That's interesting
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:19:48 PM): Make sure you throw her ass in there some where
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:20:02 PM): ROFL!
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:23:03 PM): Why HC?
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:23:17 PM): HC?
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:23:25 PM): I knew you were a democrat...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:24:01 PM): Hillary
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:24:09 PM): Her face was on the cover of a time magazine I had and was the best available. Actually I can't stand Obama.
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:24:51 PM): You have been redeemed...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:25:09 PM): lol
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:26:53 PM): He is a cloned egyptian pharoah anyway...its already been proven...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:27:39 PM): lol...I don't recall hearing about Egyptian pharaohs promising c-span coverage of health care bills
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:28:29 PM): Well we are livin the dream buddy...believe it...
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:29:36 PM): My wife walked 255 lbs worth of dogs by herself today...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:29:45 PM): wow! lol
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:30:39 PM): She said they did fine...i was not even going to try that one by myself
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:30:58 PM): Brave woman
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:32:56 PM): If you feel inclined to pass out tonight let me know so I don't wait up expecting to work :P
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:35:14 PM): I will
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:39:55 PM): I wonder if you could write off visiting up here as a business expense
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:47:06 PM): For sure
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:47:43 PM): I own a corporation that is all about assets that are tangible & intangible...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:47:59 PM): Cool beans
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:48:43 PM): As soon as I start making some money again I am coming to see you
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:48:53 PM): Sounds cool man
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:57:17 PM): I am writing tonight...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:57:35 PM): Sounds good. Let me know when you're ready
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 7:58:07 PM): K
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 7:58:20 PM): I've written almost 3 pages today
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 8:01:12 PM): Yes yes yall and it don't stop...call it a 1.8.7 on a @&:? !$!( cop...
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 8:01:24 PM): lol
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 8:01:52 PM): Dig
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 9:26:12 PM): will u publish our convo from today?
forrestjones2010 has signed back in. (2/1/2010 9:26 PM)
forrestjones2010 (2/1/2010 9:40:31 PM): Will you post todays coversation?
Last message received on 2/1/2010 at 9:40 PM
cagedmind0531 (2/1/2010 9:44:35 PM): yeah sure I can do that
Monday, February 1, 2010
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