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I like it. The stuff about her being a queen might be a bit strong because right now she is just a person who can talk to plants
forrestjones2010
k
cagedmind0531
The rest imo is strong
forrestjones2010
i'll change queen
i will be at home untill 5 want me to work on anything specific?
cagedmind0531
I really don't want her control over plants to be too, 'in your face' ya know.
forrestjones2010
k
cagedmind0531
Um...you could try to work on the Gaia story part to make it more...telling I guess
forrestjones2010
the one you were working on last night?
cagedmind0531
yeah
forrestjones2010
k
good luck at the dentists...
cagedmind0531
Yeah...not that excited about it
forrestjones2010
ask for stron drugs
g
cagedmind0531
lol
forrestjones2010
i posted under Gaia Forrest 2.10.2010
cagedmind0531
This place wouldn't take my insurance despite me calling them in advance and asking
forrestjones2010
i hate doctors and dentists
they way they have become
it is so asinine
you cant get shit done
i hope obama gets something done
cagedmind0531
This is my 3rd place to go to that won't take my insurance DESPITE their name being word for word in my big book of covered doctors
forrestjones2010
and i am not trying to be a smart ass
on that one
did you take that with you?
cagedmind0531
No, they told me Tenncare doesn't cover over 20 year olds. The last one I went to said they won't take state funded insurance
forrestjones2010
sorry to hear of your struggles
cagedmind0531
Guess I will just have to live with a chipped tooth
forrestjones2010
i hate bureacracy
i have searched my soul
i am an anarchist
in its truist sense
no gubment
sorry man
cagedmind0531
II'm just sick of my wasted time
forrestjones2010
my microsoft word just ate my document
cagedmind0531
that sucks
forrestjones2010
wth i was writing more on the love piece
the universe even thinks its odd for forrest to write about love
glad i have an idetic memory
cagedmind0531
lol
forrestjones2010
it didnt autosave any of it
ug
barph
i am writing on th blog
cagedmind0531
ok I'm free finally. The insurance company actually apologized and said they are getting a research team to call every dentist in my area to
forrestjones2010
i did allot on the gaia piece you asked me to
cagedmind0531
find out for sure who takes it
forrestjones2010
finished actualy
takes what?
cagedmind0531
my insurance
I have government paid for insurance and dealing with it's crappy shitty service is the reason I know Obama-care is such a croc of shit
forrestjones2010
ah i see
insurance is my single biggest expense hands down
i dont even want to think about what i pay
cagedmind0531
It's not fair to force people to pay for it imo
forrestjones2010
that is why i take antideppressants now
The briars and brambles comforted Gaia as they moved forward for it let her know that no others had been this way for a very long time. It also let her know that her allies were very present in a time of danger if she needed them. She had become adept in her skill at clearing the forest as she walked as if a casual reverence preceded her cadence. The forest spoke to her in an honor silent as to say, “My friend we know you are among us the green carpet will now unfold. What is you destiny sire?” But never in pride did she answer her people. Never in arrogance did she approach those willing to walk with her upon her asking. Instead with playful words she spoke to them of love and compassion. Gaia knew no other way. She never abused priviledge.
cagedmind0531
Finally got everything sorted out
Reading your stuff
I like it.
It really adds to the ambience
forrestjones2010
the gaia story piece?
cagedmind0531
The stuff you added to it
forrestjones2010
god i was fearful you might think that was too over the top with the gags
cagedmind0531
Nah, it fits
forrestjones2010
and people being bound and muted hive like
good
its brief
just wanted to pull out her compassion
cagedmind0531
Plus it's pretty sadistic because Etherians can't die from starvation so there would be no break for them
forrestjones2010
she's like well screw yall im hangin wit da bat yo
cagedmind0531
lol
forrestjones2010
i thought about that...finally it sinks in
because i thought about
maybe i can have her get them some FOD!
FOOD!
then i was like damn ot they dont eat
cagedmind0531
lol
forrestjones2010
jason will be proud i remembered
cagedmind0531
haha
forrestjones2010
question
Graven needs a mother
whats her name
cagedmind0531
Gravena
rofl
forrestjones2010
she is still live btw
no
cagedmind0531
lol
forrestjones2010
Soren?
cagedmind0531
as a girls name?
nay sir
forrestjones2010
no jj
Dorcas?
strong biblical name
no
Ayn?
after Ayn Rand?
cagedmind0531
hmm
who?
forrestjones2010
you dont know Ayn Rand
cagedmind0531
nope, I'm a heathen
forrestjones2010
the greatest female philosepher of all time and space
no joke google her smartest female to ever live
she is way cool
cagedmind0531
Only heard of male philosophers of time and space
forrestjones2010
read all her books
she rocks
not even kidding
slovakian
famous for objectivism
wrote the fountain head atlas shrugged
we would gett madd propps for casting her in our book as a name
trust me on this one
can i please can i please can i huh can i?
cagedmind0531
rofl
forrestjones2010
pronounce EYE N
thik german sounding
cagedmind0531
Yeah go ahead I suppose
forrestjones2010
like a luggy
hock a luggy
cagedmind0531
lol
forrestjones2010
i used to keep a picture of her in my wallet and tell people she was my girlfriend
cagedmind0531
ROFL
forrestjones2010
she looks like complete ass btw
will find pick
pic
oh ty jason this makes my day more than you know
question=q?
cagedmind0531
?
forrestjones2010
etherians where did they come from originally?
they live on land
who put them there
cagedmind0531
They were created on accident by the masks. They were creating the perfect form and it came so close to their essence Fracture tries to destroy
it
forrestjones2010
this piece i am doing is a pre and a post circle piece...its a myth teling piece we need more myth
cagedmind0531
In doing so he gives it life
forrestjones2010
ok...so were they created on land or sea?
cagedmind0531
Never thought of that
land?
We need to establish the crow as an etherian biblical sign
forrestjones2010
so they would have never come out of the sea in any part of their evolution? or did they evolve at all
cagedmind0531
They evolve mentally but not physically I guess. I haven't really thought it out
forrestjones2010
k thats enough for now..i just needed to know it wasnt thought out so i did go messing up what was already established
make sense?
cagedmind0531
yup
forrestjones2010
i will keep it loose and mythy
cagedmind0531
Maybe a bat would be a better pet then some fuzzy critter
what do you think?
I'll be back in a few minutes. Have to help my brother with his math
forrestjones2010
word
i posted a pic of Ayn...not as ugly as i remember...but dead none the less
stepping out for a few
u there?
cagedmind0531
so it's adahn's scene now
yeah
forrestjones2010
yup
and then follows siren at the close of adahn's...or does axis or graven get another cameo?
cagedmind0531
graven maybe...haven't decided
I was thinking maybe we could establish Adahn as a teacher...not sure
Maybe he lost a student and blames himself
or something
forrestjones2010
thinking
cagedmind0531
Maybe he designed a building that fell or something because he used his powers
forrestjones2010
hmmm
order
cagedmind0531
It needs to deal with his exile
somehow
forrestjones2010
order comes from chaos
ordo abba chao
oder's father is chaos
cagedmind0531
Maybe he got exiled because his brother ratted him out
out of jealousy
forrestjones2010
that would tie in to possible traitor roots
cagedmind0531
hmmm
forrestjones2010
order exile
you would think he could hide his for a long time
fake it and rise through the ranks
cagedmind0531
Maybe he helped Iboga design rune bombs...maybe he was helping him
forrestjones2010
perhaps even become political
figures
cagedmind0531
I think him helping design bombs would play into order well. The other exiles went against the balance of things
forrestjones2010
but dont bombs destroy order?
cagedmind0531
Depends on what they are used for. Weapons can be used to keep order and maybe that's what he thought they were being used for
forrestjones2010
gotcha...then agreed
cagedmind0531
So he was helping Iboga because Iboga threatened to exile his entire family
forrestjones2010
Adahn head bomb maker to iboga
cagedmind0531
OOOH! maybe he was designing tracking devices not bombs
But Iboga was using those to guide the bombs
forrestjones2010
role wit it
cagedmind0531
We need to discuss how humans come about because we need to start planting those seeds now
forrestjones2010
good call
oh I have a name for Gaia and Gravens daughter
cagedmind0531
Maybe everyone who had red ether becomes human. Everyone with 'tainted' blood remains etherian. Something could poison them against evolution
That would make Graven and his group remain Etherians, as well as any other exiles there are.
what name?
So...Iboga destroy's the village and Graven offers them a place to live in the forest. Once there something happens to them all
Except those gifted
forrestjones2010
Calyx
cagedmind0531
Interesting
forrestjones2010
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/calyx
it would have been Canan's name had he been a girl
cagedmind0531
Opinions?
forrestjones2010
thinking
the scalping?
cagedmind0531
?
forrestjones2010
the large event you told me about once
cagedmind0531
Yeah but that has nothing to do with humans being born or evolving
forrestjones2010
ok
just checking
cagedmind0531
Ok I've got it
forrestjones2010
so the people in the village go to graven they stay there i boga flees
cagedmind0531
There needs to be a lake near Gaiasphere. We need to write it in. People drink from the lake and overtime become human.
forrestjones2010
and something happens to the people that took refuge with graven?
cagedmind0531
yes
forrestjones2010
k
why would they drink?
gotcha
cagedmind0531
d'oh
!
good catch
Maybe gaia compels them to. Maybe Iboga curses all the village somehow and the water is the only way to restore them
forrestjones2010
i think this gets the ideas churning
we dont have to be quick to commit
it will come
cagedmind0531
I like this idea though so far
forrestjones2010
i like the idea but also consider an outside strain coming in
broadens the scope
more options
enters the alien
hell they could come in by space ship and bazinga...who ordered pizza dude?
humans
cagedmind0531
There could be other Etherian tribes that come into play once these start to evolve
forrestjones2010
what dicks graven
blast them with your detachable eye thingy
cagedmind0531
o.O
forrestjones2010
blamo interstellar war
oh...i have to be good dont I?
cagedmind0531
lol
GROUNDED
forrestjones2010
damn drat double damn
cagedmind0531
This is not Bikini Blonde Bimbos in Space Forrest
forrestjones2010
oh bother
yes i like the direction
cagedmind0531
"The ashen skin that once protected them from the environment faded to pale, while their etherian veins were drawn within.
The talons on their fingers retracted and their bodies became frail.
random thoughts
OH! This could start a big war. Where they try to force this 'cure' on others
forrestjones2010
brb
listen i hate to dash on you will explain later...gotta run pick up canan from track
love the direction...
Wednesday, February 10, 2010
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