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forrestjones2010: u there?
cagedmind0531: here now
cagedmind0531: there?
cagedmind0531: poke
forrestjones2010: here
cagedmind0531: k
forrestjones2010: lets role
cagedmind0531: alrighty
cagedmind0531: you like the movie?
forrestjones2010: got creative and wrote instead
cagedmind0531: ah ok
forrestjones2010: do you want to build someting tonight?
cagedmind0531: sure
cagedmind0531: Let's discuss where we are right now
forrestjones2010: k
cagedmind0531: So Asimov still needs the eye somehow so he'll have to get that eventually from graven.
cagedmind0531: or we could make it like an alternative that now he doesn't need
cagedmind0531: There's that then there is a golem of Iboga arriving at the city. A scene needs to be written where he is trapped in wax that doesn't seem obvious or too easy
cagedmind0531: Asimov will learn from Coral's blueprint exactly how to make the relic that can contain a soul
cagedmind0531: So what next
forrestjones2010: what if corals death print is the artifact
forrestjones2010: jat
cagedmind0531: we already went through what her deathprint was remember? a blueprint for the artifact
forrestjones2010: k
cagedmind0531: so what next
forrestjones2010: does nthat wrap up this chapter?
cagedmind0531: yeah when I am done writing the wax scene, unless you wanna write it
forrestjones2010: go ahead and finish it out
cagedmind0531: ok
cagedmind0531: so next chapter
cagedmind0531: I was thinking
cagedmind0531: What if there were warrens beneath the Gaiasphere
cagedmind0531: like a cave system
forrestjones2010: we need to review major future arcs that need to be pullled out
cagedmind0531: like what?
cagedmind0531: The continuing arc we have so far is Asimov trying to get the pieces to the relic.
cagedmind0531: or that artifact or whatever
forrestjones2010: what major events need to happen that have nor happened yet?
cagedmind0531: Eventually Asimov succeeds and destroys the world. That is near the end of the book but can happen sooner depending on how we handle it.
forrestjones2010: i want to build a sculpt of the artifact btw...later on ofcourse
forrestjones2010: destroys the whole world
forrestjones2010: poof
cagedmind0531: well the atmosphere anyway...we could build up to it like it's the end of the book then lead elsewhere after it
forrestjones2010: that is too funny
forrestjones2010: that is the scalping right?
cagedmind0531: yeah
cagedmind0531: not sure I like that term anymore though
forrestjones2010: i have always loved that idea
cagedmind0531: so...do you want that to happen sooner or later?
forrestjones2010: later
cagedmind0531: k
cagedmind0531: so what happens next chapter
cagedmind0531: we need something big, there has kinda been a lull in surprise happenings
forrestjones2010: peyton needs development
forrestjones2010: our hero needs to do somethin heroic
cagedmind0531: hmm
forrestjones2010: axis needs to show up
forrestjones2010: The Qeust to Build the Artifact fro Corals deathprint
forrestjones2010: that could flesh out everything we need
cagedmind0531: hmm, why would Graven build it? it stores souls, why would he need it?
cagedmind0531: The idea is sound, now the application
forrestjones2010: no
forrestjones2010: he wouldnt
cagedmind0531: I like the idea of him seeking to build it
forrestjones2010: but he could be involved in stopping its construction
forrestjones2010: either way
forrestjones2010: they can all play a pay centered around that aobject
cagedmind0531: What if it's a communication device to souls and Asimov is just perverting that.
cagedmind0531: He wants to speak to Gaia
forrestjones2010: ok
cagedmind0531: just an idea
cagedmind0531: other ideas?
cagedmind0531: What if it's a prison and it's the only way to store Iboga's soul for good
cagedmind0531: A prison would allow it to double as a vessel easily
forrestjones2010: dont like prison
cagedmind0531: hmm
forrestjones2010: what about the energy source for a new form of being or a ne city-state
cagedmind0531: what if it's a reactor they decide to build to protect the gaia tree
cagedmind0531: after Iboga's attack damagers it
cagedmind0531: damages*
cagedmind0531: That would tie into there being a big explosion
cagedmind0531: Then that the power from that reactor corrupts the populace and that's why they end up leaving behind the gaia tree
forrestjones2010: thinking
cagedmind0531: How do you feel about that idea?
cagedmind0531: It would be like tempting people with technology again
forrestjones2010: thinking
forrestjones2010: -+
cagedmind0531: ?
forrestjones2010: what about the living underneath the gaia tree in the caves and tunneles
cagedmind0531: I thought maybe there could be a chapter that went down there for some reason. Maybe to plant the reactor
forrestjones2010: i am not for or against the reactor
forrestjones2010: it seems kinda blah
forrestjones2010: i think we need to flesh out our relationships
cagedmind0531: I am thinking about the reactor in terms of it relating to a present need and a future need. Present need being the Gaia tree gets injured and needs a shield of some type to sustain it till it repairs. The future need being that the people need something that lures them away from gaia and fuels the explosion
forrestjones2010: i wand graven dreaming in angst over gaias loss
cagedmind0531: That's good but we can intermix that anywhere.
forrestjones2010: make them tree top dwellers
cagedmind0531: What if! It makes dreams reality.
forrestjones2010: they can see the top os the dome from anywhere yet the tops of the trees give light and wind and bird
forrestjones2010: what does?
cagedmind0531: the artifact
cagedmind0531: that could be why graven builds it or tries to but fails
forrestjones2010: no
cagedmind0531: You going to be on a bit? I need some food
forrestjones2010: yeah
cagedmind0531: I'll just be 10 minutes. Going to run to Mcdonalds
cagedmind0531: cool?
forrestjones2010: yeah
forrestjones2010: here
forrestjones2010: there?
forrestjones2010: you up?
cagedmind0531: up now
forrestjones2010: hey
forrestjones2010: what is the pw to the blog i cant remember it
forrestjones2010: siren333
cagedmind0531: siren33
cagedmind0531: or something
forrestjones2010: i am trying to post and cant post...see if you can
forrestjones2010: Coral’s death was critical to the fragile society on many levels. She meant so many things to so may different levels. The art of her dying was no different.
The Eoti had been methodically called, summoned one be one they entered her anter room. Her death chamber became rather crowded as if is it was a freakish event to be gawked at at some horror show.
Finally Syrka arrived and cleared the death chamber of the dross that had no business among the dead and dying. He spoke to the loudly and in a more anctient term.
“Elo thaboiuc Ta Ni”
After he spoke there words , as if a heavy curse filled the room all but The Eoti remained to to carry Coral through the Death March.

(Enter Death March Here)

cagedmind0531: posted
cagedmind0531: This sounds like something that should be written over something I wrote already
cagedmind0531: Which is fine.
forrestjones2010: i just need to start somewhere
cagedmind0531: That works
forrestjones2010: does yours already show and explain her dp?
cagedmind0531: I don't think so
forrestjones2010: ok i am going there then
forrestjones2010: unless you want me to focus somethwhere else
cagedmind0531: You are writing about it being a blueprint for the Artifact right?
forrestjones2010: yes
cagedmind0531: and yes that's a good starting point
cagedmind0531: apparently beth read my blog...something about how I said the only good part of our relationship is the sex...
cagedmind0531: I have no fucking clue what she is talking about, I never said that
forrestjones2010: but we dont have sex jason
cagedmind0531: I meant my relationship with her you big dork sauce
forrestjones2010: lol
cagedmind0531: She is so freaking paranoid sometimes
cagedmind0531: I told her I might have pink eye and if I do we may not get to see each other this week and instead of hearing I was sick and concerned she heard me making excuses to not see her
forrestjones2010: hmmmm
forrestjones2010: The Chain Stokes breaththing had set in meaning the the carriers od death were soon approaching and the Eoti would need to be soon in their exacting positions.

Sometheing was different about the reaping of Coral’s soul. None of the Council of the Eoti could quantify it aby account later buy the atmosphere and tone where marked with underpinnings of malevalence that none of them quite understood.

(enter process of deathprint capture here if needed)

Upon glancing the deathprint the Eoti were each one in complete amazement…

forrestjones2010: of
forrestjones2010: ****************************************************************************
forrestjones2010: will you post what is below this line
cagedmind0531: you mean above?
forrestjones2010: Coral’s death was critical to the fragile society on many levels. She meant so many things to so may different levels. The art of her dying was no different.
The Eoti had been methodically called, summoned one be one they entered her ante room. Her death chamber became rather crowded as if is it was a freakish event to be gawked at some horror show.
Finally Syrka arrived and cleared the death chamber of the dross that had no business among the dead and dying. He spoke to the loudly and in a more ancient term.
“Elo thaboiuc Ta Ni”
After he spoke there words it was as if a heavy curse filled the room all but The Eoti remained to carry Coral through the Death March.

(Enter Death March Here)

The Chain Stokes breath thing had set in meaning the carriers of death were soon
forrestjones2010: no
forrestjones2010: below that line
cagedmind0531: posted
forrestjones2010: why cant i get into the blog?
cagedmind0531: not sure, did you try siren33 as a password?
cagedmind0531: ?
forrestjones2010: finally got in
forrestjones2010: wwho knows
forrestjones2010: i am making the artifact
forrestjones2010: and siren
forrestjones2010: like billy ocean said Siren gonna be my "non stop Lovva"
cagedmind0531: lol
forrestjones2010: i will be on till 5 then i gots ta roll out
forrestjones2010: fyi
cagedmind0531: ok man. I'm kind of distracted. Alot on my mind
cagedmind0531: I'll try to help ya as ya need it though
Last message received on 4/3/2010 at 1:52 AM
forrestjones2010: im golden
forrestjones2010: biatch
forrestjones2010: why yo so distracted
forrestjones2010: lookin at hot chicks on line?
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forrestjones2010: i am out man...off to nacogdoches with my dad and canan...i posted some stuff...laters man...love you jason
forrestjones2010: you are like a brother to me